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Girl inspired by Laura Muntz
Description:
Please be easy on me its been almost 2 years since i touched my drawing tablet. I was trying to draw a reproduction of Canadian Artist Laura Muntz's Yough girl in the garden but i eventually gave up and changed it completely (making it original). Wanting good criticism please.
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Comments
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Ushbus 20 Aug 2015
Good criticism should be something that builds up your work. A lot of people on this site type "nice" and that bothers me because that is not a proper critique in the art world. I really love this piece because your use of lines gives her a softness and character. Your use of shadow and contrast is done really well in the hair and the neck. Something you could of done better is the straightness of the eyes, but i have never seen the original piece and some peoples eyes are naturally crooked. I don't think it takes away from the piece though. Its wonderful for not touching a tablet in two years. Im in the same situation because i gave my old tablet to a kid in need and it wasnt compatible with my new computer :c. Love it keep up the good work! Sorry for being so chatty!
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Anonymous 20 Aug 2015
Eyes and nose are asymmetrical, but still it's nice work:) Try more, you'll success, i'm sure
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faxstaff 20 Aug 2015
is flat
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