(Animation) Forbidden Friendship

blvckink 8 Jul 2015

nice work! i can tell you put alot of effort into it :D i gave it a like ;)

einsteinsdog 11 Jul 2015

The little guy perched on the fox's head is a good clincher for the feeling.

Spideecartoon 8 Jul 2015

Awesome art

Jacorien.T 8 Jul 2015

wow!! its so good!! I loved the story

Elfios 8 Jul 2015

Well it cut my comment there were like 5 more but I'm to lazy to write all of it again #fatface :-3)) most important- Why didn't you collor whole animation -_- it destroyed the effect(story was cool :D ).Learn how to draw trees

Elfios 8 Jul 2015

1. Anatomy could be a little better 2. Coloring isn't worst but you should work on that as well 3. Next time add shading and shades 4. Consider the "gravity". What I mean is look at that bird and tell me if he look like he is standing on his legs or is he druk and he is falling over ? 5. Does the fox should look at us or shuld he look at that bird. That confues the story in this image 6 Try to make diferent lines. Think of a line like of a shadow in some plaes it will be thicker and in other thiner 7. Learn how to paint grass it is hard for me so I avoid drawing grass as best as I can 8.It is bether to erase some of your work and drawi it again. If you see That something is wrong and you change it over and over again erase all of it and draw it again. If you did make somethink once you can do it twice :D 9. Remember That you don't have to draw something in one dat or in two hrs, you can draw something few days and believe me if you spend more time on something it will look better 1

Anonymous 8 Jul 2015

Love it

Anonymous 8 Jul 2015

Cool

xxdaersdrfzxx 8 Jul 2015

quite good! the fox is very well done! but make the fur a bit more smooth! ^v^