I did this as a submission piece to a program a few months ago. I didn't get in, understandably, but I did get into a different program that's local and helping me get a portfolio together by next July or so. Which is good cause my top choice wants applications the August before my senior year and if I don't get on that NOW I'm screwed. Wish me luck though!
Anonymous 3 Oct 2014
Its possible that you could add more detail and dept to the cave. And since most cave are quite dark, you could almost create a path of light shining in to the cave