Mountains

Ok, Here we go. Problem 1) This piece is not well framed. Presentation is important. 2) The Sky could use some dark shading, at least add some fluff clouds or do some fog effect around the mountain and sky 3) The setting for this looks like it belongs in a snowy area, and I actually think that the sky should be brighter 4) This one is just a suggestion, but a background would bring the mountains you have right now, pop more. Maybe add more mountains. Another suggestions would be to add a foreground, such as: animal nest or a person climbing. Positive: 1) The mountains look fantastic 2) The direction you are going with this piece looks like a potential for a story-tell opportunity Overall, I like direction you are going with this, but the suggestions I gave above might help this piece even more.