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Yosemite Valley
Description:
This is an acrylic painting of Yosemite Valley I did for a Christmas present for my mom. The original photo was taken by me even though you could probably find 100 more just like it online. I had only done one painting before this so it was definitely good practice to try another one. Please let me know what I can improve on because I know it's not perfect, thanks!
Comments
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Oscarlira 13 Jan 2016
This is outstanding, everything is perfect
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kitten_500 15 Jan 2016
Nice.
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doubleU-T-F 13 Apr 2016
Ur painting is really nicely done, the mountains are looking awesome, of course U could use a little more shading, but sometimes It's good to see something that isn't like very detailed, that I can visualize this by my imagination. It's like U don't see details cause it's pretty far, so it's off Ur sight and that's pretty fair to me. Trees in the distance are done great, but what's bad there are those trees in front of picture, they're so poor detailed, I mean it's not all that terrible with them, but if U wanna know what to improve... I'd focus on what's closest to the viewer. On the other side too much detail would distract ppl from watching the whole landscape so it's kinda hard to say. So I got 2 ideas, idea 1 - more details on the foreground or idea 2 - make some blur effect on the foreground. In general I really like Ur painting and U did good job there.
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asdawson 14 Jan 2016
good work
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eni7878 12 Jan 2016
Very good, at first sight I thought it was a photo...
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Anonymous 12 Jan 2016
beautiful
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