Drawing Joy WIP 2 by Oscarlira

snakedaemon 7 Jan 2016

Nice work

trevorp 8 Jan 2016

Lovely artwork yet again Oscar :-)

kitten_500 7 Jan 2016

Well for one thing: how come you are not asking the other people of this comment section of why they like your work? Second of all: You are one of the few people that actually cares about a critique. If you wanted a suggestion, why not say in the description? Besides your work is not bad because it is well done, and pointing out the obvious would be a waste of time. However, now you really want my opinion, here it goes: The background has too much negative space; Continue to work on the girls hair; the face is done very well because it is not like the arms, where there is an outline. When going realistic, outlining a the foreground should be out of the question; Now that I look at her, more detail around the lips would not be a bad touch (maybe some shine or look up close-up references of lips). By the way, before posting your work on the internet, try to frame it correctly or crop it half way from the top to the head, it is unprofessional. Next time, if you want a critique, just say,

kitten_500 7 Jan 2016

Not bad.