Drawing CharcoalStudy by Beudeltee

Oscarlira 14 Dec 2015

Beautiful, certainly You are very good drawing women Body, i would say maybe more contrast in the Black would make your drawing even better, Just a comment :)

Khobe 14 Dec 2015

Welcome back, you are resurfacing with a very nice organic sketch of the most difficult genre_ the human figure, female is even harder. This is a very beautiful execution but don't be afraid to use your eraser to make your main lines even more elegant. You can push this process as far as you want or/and leave roughness where you want to. The mix of soft and rough makes fascinating effects.

Khobe 15 Dec 2015

When you talk about graphic appeal, I'm not sure exactly what you're refering to. But what I understand of the classical concept is there are fundamentals to this. The composition relative to the entire space of the work and the inner elements at play in relative proportions to one another and the interpretation of the subject. When I look at your sketch I don't see any faults here. The interpretation part could be stronger but it is to be expected from somebody that's just starting in this difficult art genre to go soft at first. In fact this is good because it means you keep a critical eye your work and take the time you need for yourself to build a solid base.