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Mental Cover
Description:
So here's the cover art of my new manga series ^.^ I was thinking about starting a different series but with the webtoons sci-fi comic contest, I decided to make this instead lol and as you can see, i'm making this series traditionally lol It's called "Mental" and heres the summary of the story: It’s the year 3417 and World War VI has already passed and the country that was once The United States of America was destroyed to only be replaced by The Republic. But is this new world of glittering technology and new advancements hiding a more sinister plot as children are tested on to unlock powers? Story and Art by me, Hero87 (the username most people know me by) and edited by my best friend and eraser WhiteKnight303 You can find the series on both tapastic.com and webtoons.com (for the sci-fi contest) and deviantart.com anyway I hope you guys like it =3
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Comments
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blvckink 17 Aug 2015
looks amazing, keep on doing your thing :D
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Eddieblz 28 Jul 2015
Sounds like an interesting story.:)
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Laurenh11598 7 Nov 2015
Awesome! :)
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kitten_500 25 Feb 2016
I like the hair
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trevorp 9 Aug 2016
Like the concept and design :-)
FaerieWarrior 10 Aug 2016
thanks :3 if you find it interesting feel free to check out the story on wattpad.com or the manga on tapastic.com
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xpector 11 Aug 2015
nice one
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Hatshj 11 Aug 2015
Sounds good. Nice work:)
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SarembaArt 21 Aug 2015
Nice hair color! ^^
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Anonymous 23 Oct 2015
Like the story of the character. Try to describe more in the text and the caracther, like a concept art (face, special object,etc.) It will help to understand the character with more detail.
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Ivory Noir 5 Oct 2015
Very cool
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Art is life 23 Aug 2015
Keep posting ur good wk.
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Art is life 23 Aug 2015
Cutie pie Nice wk
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RosalieX 18 Aug 2015
looks great!
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osmanthusette 7 Aug 2015
This is cute!
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BloodyWolf 2 Aug 2015
Nice.
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evinuttygelle 2 Jul 2015
i love her hair so much! :)
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Photobones 2 Jul 2015
Since you're the editor, hopefully you can appreciate this critique of your write=up, specifically: "But is this new world of glittering technology and new advancements hiding a more sinister plot as children are tested on to unlock powers?" My rewrite would be "But is this new world of glittering technology and new advancements hiding a more sinister plot as children are tested for unlocked powers?" Always examine your prepositions to see if you are using words in the most efficient manner possible. Spend some time mulling over a preposition choice for the sentence such as [for, to, of, ] etc. Experienced editors know when something doesn't sound quite right, or they'll know how to make it sound better. The other night I ran across some wording sorta like this: "Ultimately it will be destroyed in the end, at which point they'll have no choice except to rebuild it." Do you see what's wrong with this sentence? It's clear enough, few people would be at a loss for the meaning, but
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